Thursday, November 20, 2008

雨.手

雨一直重重地
稀里哗啦打在天花板上。

我懒在床上,
望着窗口外的雨帘。

雨,掉入了我深邃的心里
牢牢地冷冻我的身躯。

就像将我雪藏,
无法拔开我内心的力量。

xxx xxx xxx xxx xxx

雨,外
我还想着,你。

雨一直无法让我掩饰自己
苍穹亦无法埋没灰色的愁

你现在做些什么?
可有想在雨中的我?

可有用思念来紧紧地抱着我
温暖那颗冷却的手?

xxx xxx xxx xxx xxx

从窗口伸出冰冷的手
沾湿了雨水,手更冷。

轻轻地把双手敷在脸颊
雨水在轮廓中轻溜,凉快谐惬

原来雨水可以让我在模糊的雨中
感受你, 一直在守护着我。

5 comments:

jiubo said...

好诗,富有雨中情怀的感觉。
流文顺畅,读来很有韵味。
佩服!

Vincent Cho said...

可惜那不是温暖的雨。

Jing said...

雨天总让人涌起想念……

Anonymous said...

let her cry for she's a lady...

let her dream for she's a child...

let the rain fall down upon her...

she's a free and gentle flower
growing wild....

Wois said...

jiubo :
有感而触。
谢谢你的抬举。。

Vincent Cho :
让人更怅然。

Jing:
思念是没完没了的。

Wd:

"Today, I cried and cried...
I had all sorts of feelings. Sadness, immense joy, fear ..
My spirit is overflowing with joy because I see
you and me looking at our bright future together...
And I feel sadness because of past memories...
For many years, I have denied myself,
denied my freedom, even denied my identity."

"Our happiness is dependent upon the other's happiness....
I know how you feel...and I shared your pain..
I could imagine what you would give up to make someone happy...
I promise ...I'll do all the things that you were looking for...
I'll pacify you when you need pacifying...
I'll protect you when you need protecting...
I'll comfort you when you're sick or when you feel sad....
Our love transcends from our hearts..."